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I carry a song in my heart
And that song is made of you

gently shifting melodies
sweetly singing of passionate
symphonics,
careful tender heartstrings
plucking out the base of our
simplest desires

I could listen forever lost
in the music of your spirit

oh how it makes me sing!
adding the harmony of my voice,
mending, blending our halves
into a whole of wondrous ecstasy.
louder and LOUDER  our song rises

then soft. As the sun sets
the last whispers of your
              luscious, lullaby soul
                      serenade me in my dreams
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O.o o.O
i hope it reads well... >.<

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:iconmistakenpoet:
It's pretty good, I like it. Then again I'm a musician, so I tend to love anything related to music, haha.
:iconartemisfire:
lol ^^ thanks

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yes I know I'm crazy you don't have to tell /me/

Compassion; the love you can give everyone and the love everyone needs.

everything written comes from the heart
:iconjbhp:
Your poetry just keeps getting better and better :D I seriously was going to cry after I read it, instead I will *fave" it again..you may dance now! :dance: :XD: :hug:

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I am yours amd you are mine <3

Twinsy:So, I touched his pants in the dream, then I guess I beat him up.
Me:So, it was a reaction of love making
Twinsy:o_o x333333
Me:Why else would you touch his pants!?!
:iconartemisfire:
YAY! lol, officially my favorite comment ever! =D let the dancing ensue~~

:dance: :boogie: :dance:
(>^.^)> ^(^.^)^ <(^.^< ) v(^.^)v (>^.^)>

~(^ . ^)~

> . >

--
yes I know I'm crazy you don't have to tell /me/

Compassion; the love you can give everyone and the love everyone needs.

everything written comes from the heart
:iconjbhp:
Wow..that was...AMAZING..:DANCE:

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I am yours amd you are mine <3

Twinsy:So, I touched his pants in the dream, then I guess I beat him up.
Me:So, it was a reaction of love making
Twinsy:o_o x333333
Me:Why else would you touch his pants!?!
:iconjbhp:
:dance: :boogie:

--
I am yours amd you are mine <3

Twinsy:So, I touched his pants in the dream, then I guess I beat him up.
Me:So, it was a reaction of love making
Twinsy:o_o x333333
Me:Why else would you touch his pants!?!
:iconartemisfire:
lmao >.< thanks JBHP :glomp:

--
yes I know I'm crazy you don't have to tell /me/

Compassion; the love you can give everyone and the love everyone needs.

everything written comes from the heart
:iconjbhp:
no problem dear! :D :glomp:

--
I am yours amd you are mine <3

Twinsy:So, I touched his pants in the dream, then I guess I beat him up.
Me:So, it was a reaction of love making
Twinsy:o_o x333333
Me:Why else would you touch his pants!?!

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