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when i was little, i always thought that
you were supposed to shine
with light that came from some distant kingdom
that none has ever seen

they said you should have wings
snowy, white and feathered;
only the special ones may have more than two
offering protection within a downy shield

but I've grown up since that age of whispered stories
I've found that they were wrong
the light i see in you, glows brightly from inside
guiding me through this land of shadowed dark

not needing wings to lift me up,
always helping me to find my way back
to a smile. your kind words bring,
send, my ever falling heart into a world
worth living
written for :iconrawem0tion:'s theme "angel"

tell me <strike>if i suck</strike> if this needs work. :)
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crystalstormrunner Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2010
At a loss for words...beautiful is all i can really say.
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Artemisfire Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2010
thank you very much ^^
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TheCoalMineCanary Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
What a beautiful piece. :heart:
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:iconartemisfire:
Artemisfire Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2008
thank you! :)
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TheCoalMineCanary Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
:D
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Heaven-CanWait Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2008
In my opinion though of course including the image of an angel (which was the actual theme :giggle:) this was different. Liked the child and its beliefs. . . you've written such a lovely piece!
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Artemisfire Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2008
thank you very much, i din't really want to go for the obvious direct mention of an angel for this poem.
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:iconheaven-canwait:
Heaven-CanWait Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2008
I see, you're very welcome =)
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ArrogantReality Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2008
:heart:
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Artemisfire Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2008
thanks =)
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